Very sad, indeed. Well written dialogue.
The dialogue really brings out the emotion.. So sad.
Closing Time. Have you read the book by that same name by the author of Catch-22?Never easy, but you did a good job of capturing it in 33 words.
as hubbymoose and I get older we see more and more family and friends leaving us before WE re ready. Very well done.
Very emotional conversation. Nice writing.
Very moving. Sad but, good at the same time. Very well done.
Death hurts & how.An emotional piece,very well written.
Yes, very sad but captured well.
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My heart snaps for these people.
There is a sadness that can never be touched; a well deep and unfathomable. You shed light on that darkness with this.
Ouch. That's hard to read. Nice job.
So sad and so well captured. Well done.
Oh my. Not light reading here... that's some real dialogue.
speak your mind.