A lost kid is always the worst ): I could feel the desperation and fear. Awesome piece!
Oh,the panic & helplessness of a small child lost!How well you have expressed all this in just 33 words!Excellent job:-)
I'm sure Mommy is in a panic as well. I hope nothing terrible has happened.Katie atBankerchick Scratchings
I would hate to be lost in that fog. Interesting piece.
Poor baby! It's terrible to be lost.
Scary scenario. Give me chills just thinking about it. Well done!
I totally heard this in that little one's voice. Well done!
You have the voice down. Always makes me on edge. I've been the lost one AND lost one. Not fun either way!
A nightmare in 33 words. This is a great piece - I agree, you nailed the voice. Awesome!
Great use of character point of view.
good take on how being lost feels
Definitely some of my less pleasant childhood memories... And probably not the happiest for Mum, either! Well done.
I hate to see a lost kid. Although my brother was quite the hider: At mall's he would jump up with the mannequins, adopt a pose, and stand there frozen while my mother went into a panic.
speak your mind.