tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2230384076641171546.post2841401369835841455..comments2023-06-21T02:53:31.158-05:00Comments on finally Mom: Screwed { - Fiction - }christinahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02983259980848913151noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2230384076641171546.post-18077658552422674042012-11-21T21:03:53.960-06:002012-11-21T21:03:53.960-06:00This is awesome! I loved how you ended it so abrup...This is awesome! I loved how you ended it so abruptly! Well done :)Stacie @ Snaps and Bitshttp://www.snapsandbits.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2230384076641171546.post-58253131943347680172012-11-21T14:52:57.164-06:002012-11-21T14:52:57.164-06:00Thanks for the enjoyable piece! I liked the visual...Thanks for the enjoyable piece! I liked the visual of the friend waving her hand like she's holding at a casino. Nicely done! Miz Yankhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02038820718109755580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2230384076641171546.post-30475417324502438652012-11-21T13:06:58.394-06:002012-11-21T13:06:58.394-06:00You do dialog very well! Loved the dollhouse propo...You do dialog very well! Loved the dollhouse proposal and she is right to be tentative about the age. But swingers' clubs?Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04841767868797265391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2230384076641171546.post-45817991768559453272012-11-20T19:11:49.378-06:002012-11-20T19:11:49.378-06:00Very well done. Great dialogue. Very well done. Great dialogue. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05393708147017569061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2230384076641171546.post-23170842931930466902012-11-20T13:36:43.618-06:002012-11-20T13:36:43.618-06:00I love that the ring was in a dollhouse -- she'...I love that the ring was in a dollhouse -- she's a trophy wife he's planning to treat like a Barbie or something. Awesome!IASoupMamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11222652185240780006noreply@blogger.com